Wednesday, 13 January 2016

Magazine Pitch (25 Words)



Amendments

I made changes to my pitch due to feedback from the class. I lengthened the video from around 30 seconds up to around 1 minute 30 seconds, to allow me more time to portray my magazines aspects to the viewer. I have also added the price of my magazine and the final decided title of the magazine, as I forget to incorporate these aspects in my original pitch.

I also decided to change the magazine name to Calyx.

12 comments:

  1. I really like the stylistic value of your pitch for I think that it matches the genre really well. To improve you could include circulation figures.

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  2. I really like the stylistic value of your pitch for I think that it matches the genre really well. To improve you could include circulation figures.

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  3. I really like the styling you have chosen for your pitch- it fits the genre you have chosen well. The photographs and music also used emphasises the genre you have chosen and helps show how you plan on interpret it. Like already mentioned, remember to include circulation figures.

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  4. Images have been selected with precision. Generally a good pitch

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  5. Stylish pitch with great use of images, colours and fonts. The music works well and matches your brand. All aspects have been well thought out which has concluded in a successful pitch.

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  6. The colours, pictures, music and styling fit together really well, it also matches the alternative genre too. I also like the animation selected for the pitch.

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  7. The colours, pictures, music and styling fit together really well, it also matches the alternative genre too. I also like the animation selected for the pitch.

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  8. Good stylish pitch that portrays your genre very well, a good pitch.

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  9. A very stylish pitch that has clear connotations of your magazine genre. The music, animation and images used represent the style of your magazine well and create an overall effective pitch.

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  10. A really well presented pitch. The images and music really help to visualise the style of your magazine.

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  11. I really like your pitch as I can see your clear aspirations for you magazine. Your pitch is very stylish and the use of images, colours and fonts clearly shows what genre of music you have chosen. The music selection for your pitch is also very good as it links to your genre. Overall this is a very successful pitch and I ecpect you to succeed if you stick to your aspirations.

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  12. A very stylish magazine pitch, displaying clear understanding of your genre and target audience. I would trust that you are competent in creating your magazine.

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