Cover- WWW- the background the main image is really eye catching and stands out a lot EBI- next to number 153, state that it is the issue number so that it is clear to the reader
Contents- WWW- once again, a really good picture EBI- would be better if the layout was a little more different
Double page- WWW- a really good, clear layout so it is easy for the reader EBI- on the left page, either have just a white page with text on it or use your image with just text on it, try not to have the image and then the text on a white block.
WWW- I like the background that you have used, i also like how you have used it for all three pages. I also like the layout of your contents page. EBI-The title of your magazine could be bigger so that it stands out. The contents title could also be bigger.
Cover- WWW- The front cover is very colourful and so I think it would stand out well. The layout is great and I like the scraped/dirtied effect on the masthead EBI- Add the word issue number to help make it more clearer Contents- WWW- Matches the front cover really well by using a very similar colour pallet EBI- Not sure whether I like the bottom table but that is just personal preference Double page spread- WWW- Very colourful and interesting and the colour scheme is really good as it makes the article interactive EBI- Remove the lightning so the text is a bit clearer
Cover- WWW-The styling of the cover works well, the choice of font is also effective EBI-The masthead was made slightly bigger and the taglines smaller
Contents- WWW-Good structured layout, the styling is also continued from the cover EBI-Maybe include the date under the issue number in the top right to make it easier to understand
DPS- WWW-The lightning bolt adds a interesting design feature an incorporates the background into the article EBI-Maybe use an alternative background to that used on the cover and contents
Cover WWW - Good image usage makes en eye catching cover EBI - The masthead could be made bigger and a bit bolder Contents WWW - Very solid layout makes it easy to navigate the contents EBI - There is quite alot of empty space that could be changed Double Page Spread WWW - Solid draft article EBI - Maybe don't use one image for the whole two pages
Cover WWW - Good image usage makes en eye catching cover EBI - The masthead could be made bigger and a bit bolder Contents WWW - Very solid layout makes it easy to navigate the contents EBI - There is quite alot of empty space that could be changed Double Page Spread WWW - Solid draft article EBI - Maybe don't use one image for the whole two pages
cover www: good layout and the background of your image works well ebi: writing at the top on the top right should be moved or changed colour because it clashes with the background making it hard to read
contents www: colour scheme goes well throughout it all ebi: make the 153 smaller or add "issue no." to inform them what it means
double page www: good amount of information in the article and also sticking to the colour scheme too is good ebi: make sure it doesn't become to over powering with the background and the yellow lighting too.
Cover- WWW- I like the layout and style of your magazine front cover. The colour scheme is also very good. EBI- I would make the masthead font bigger.
Contents- WWW- Very simplistic but an effective style of contents page that you have made. EBI- There is too much white so could make the text and image bigger to try and hide the white. Double page spread- WWW- Very good colour scheme. EBI- Remove white background on the text as I do not think it looks professional.
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW- the background the main image is really eye catching and stands out a lot
EBI- next to number 153, state that it is the issue number so that it is clear to the reader
Contents-
WWW- once again, a really good picture
EBI- would be better if the layout was a little more different
Double page-
WWW- a really good, clear layout so it is easy for the reader
EBI- on the left page, either have just a white page with text on it or use your image with just text on it, try not to have the image and then the text on a white block.
WWW- I like the background that you have used, i also like how you have used it for all three pages. I also like the layout of your contents page.
ReplyDeleteEBI-The title of your magazine could be bigger so that it stands out. The contents title could also be bigger.
Cover:
ReplyDeleteWWW: Bright and colourful
EBI: Barcode doesn't match the rest of page
Contents:
WWW: The contents grid keeps it organized and looks good.
DPS:
WWW: Image looks really good
EBI: Bigger font, difficult to read
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW- the background the main image really good
EBI- next to number 153, state that it is the issue number so that it is clear to the reader
Contents-
WWW- a really good picture
EBI- cant think of anyone
Double page-
WWW- a really good, clear layout so it is easy for the reader, really good editing used.
EBI- really good double page spread
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW- The front cover is very colourful and so I think it would stand out well. The layout is great and I like the scraped/dirtied effect on the masthead
EBI- Add the word issue number to help make it more clearer
Contents-
WWW- Matches the front cover really well by using a very similar colour pallet
EBI- Not sure whether I like the bottom table but that is just personal preference
Double page spread-
WWW- Very colourful and interesting and the colour scheme is really good as it makes the article interactive
EBI- Remove the lightning so the text is a bit clearer
Cover:
ReplyDeleteWWW- Bright and colourful.
EBI- reposition the barcode.
Contents: well formatted and clear.
EBI- Include more text, don't leave as big of a boarder.
Double page:
WWW- Good photo.
EBI- I wouldn't use the lighting bolt as it makes it more difficult to read.
Cover
ReplyDeleteWWW: I like the layout and the font
EBI: possibly move the writing at the top down and make it bigger
Contents
WWW: nice layout again
EBI: another artist could feature it make it look different
DPS
WWW: the colour and images are nice, making it look different
EBI: move the lightning bolt up to make it centralised
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW- Nice bold photo, the colours go well together.
EBI- Maybe change the masthead font.
Contents-
WWW- Clean layout. I really like it
EBI-
DPS-
WWW- Well laid out, good structure.
EBI- remove the lightning bolt in my opinion
Cover
ReplyDeleteWWW - Professional layout
EBI - Background dissertation
Contents
WWW - The grid method
EBI - Poor model choice
DP spread
WWW - The lightning bolt
EBI - Poor model choice
Front cover
ReplyDeleteWWW- Bold title and photo and the colours look good together
EBI- State next to '153' that it is the issue number
Contents
WWW- Good layout and the text and images are perfectly in line
EBI- A different artist in the photo maybe
DPS
WWW- Good structure to the page and colours go well
EBI- Maybe the lightning bolt could be removed or moved but that it is really
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW-Good layout and style. The colours in the background are good.
EBI- make the masthead font bigger
Contents-
WWW- The brand image continues and is easy to spot. simple but effective style.
EBI- there was less white (make picture and text bigger)
Double page spread-
WWW- Greta style and use of photoshop. Looks professional.
EBI- Make text in the white box bigger and easier to read
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW-The styling of the cover works well, the choice of font is also effective
EBI-The masthead was made slightly bigger and the taglines smaller
Contents-
WWW-Good structured layout, the styling is also continued from the cover
EBI-Maybe include the date under the issue number in the top right to make it easier to understand
DPS-
WWW-The lightning bolt adds a interesting design feature an incorporates the background into the article
EBI-Maybe use an alternative background to that used on the cover and contents
Cover
ReplyDeleteWWW - Good image usage makes en eye catching cover
EBI - The masthead could be made bigger and a bit bolder
Contents
WWW - Very solid layout makes it easy to navigate the contents
EBI - There is quite alot of empty space that could be changed
Double Page Spread
WWW - Solid draft article
EBI - Maybe don't use one image for the whole two pages
Cover
ReplyDeleteWWW - Good image usage makes en eye catching cover
EBI - The masthead could be made bigger and a bit bolder
Contents
WWW - Very solid layout makes it easy to navigate the contents
EBI - There is quite alot of empty space that could be changed
Double Page Spread
WWW - Solid draft article
EBI - Maybe don't use one image for the whole two pages
cover
ReplyDeletewww: good layout and the background of your image works well
ebi: writing at the top on the top right should be moved or changed colour because it clashes with the background making it hard to read
contents
www: colour scheme goes well throughout it all
ebi: make the 153 smaller or add "issue no." to inform them what it means
double page
www: good amount of information in the article and also sticking to the colour scheme too is good
ebi: make sure it doesn't become to over powering with the background and the yellow lighting too.
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW- I like the layout and style of your magazine front cover. The colour scheme is also very good.
EBI- I would make the masthead font bigger.
Contents-
WWW- Very simplistic but an effective style of contents page that you have made.
EBI- There is too much white so could make the text and image bigger to try and hide the white.
Double page spread-
WWW- Very good colour scheme.
EBI- Remove white background on the text as I do not think it looks professional.